Post by Ninian on Mar 25, 2005 14:41:07 GMT -5
:DHi heres a story i wrote i hope ya like it...Its a pretty long story so I'm only gonna show you capter on and two...tell me what ya think and if i should post more of it.
Chapter 1: My life is over
One day a girl named Koyoka was serving the costermers at her job,
when her boss came up to her and told her it was her turn to close down the shop.
10:00...Awww...Man i'm like so tired. Koyoka said to her self as she locked up the shop.
Then a strange man came up to her.
The End is near.
Get away from me!Koyoka said as she screamed.
Then a giant Anaconda burst from under the ground.
Koyoka flew across the street into a wall
because of the impact.
Ugh...What happened. Koyoka said as she woke up.
Your in my realm. said a deep voice.
Who are you?
I am the ruler of darkness.
The voice got closer and closer. Koyoka got up and ran out of the room..........
Chapter 2:Lost inside
As she ran the hall turned into a forest.
Roots came from the ground as she tried to run.
She tripped and scraped her arm and leg.
Blood dripped from her body.
Where ever you run I'm there...HAHAHAHA!
Thorns came from the ground.
Koyoka screamed in agony.
Then a boy came from out of nowhere and swooped
Koyoka up into his arms.
He flew gracefuly into the sky.
They came to a stop at a waterfall.
Hey girl wake up....
Koyoka:Huh..wha..where am I, and who are you?
The boy:My name is Serie, and you?
Koyoka.
Serie:No offense but after that you should be dead.
I mean those thorns went through your intire body.
Koyoka:If thats true then why am I not bleeding.
Serie:I don't know. But you probably need some rest so
I suggest you get some rest.
HAHAHA! It dosen't matter who your with I'm still there
I'll never leave until I have you in my arms again.
Koyoka:What do you want from me!
Why can't you just leave me be.
A shadow approached her,it grabbed her waist.
Then a body appeared.It started to kiss koyoka...
But then she pushed him away.
He pulled his sword out.
If you dont want live and be with me.Then die here and now!!!!
Koyoka:Noooooo....Huh..wha... Oh it must've been a dream.
Koyoka got up from her resting place and walked over to Serie and kissed him good-bye.
As Koyoka walked into the forest it started to change.
The ground she stood on started to rise.
Kiyoka: WHOA!
Then all of a sudden she was sorrounded by rocks and ruins.
Koyoka wandered off into the dark.
She got tired and sat down by a rock.
Koyoka: I must be dreaming, I mean this can't be true.
One minuet I'm locking up the shop, the next minuet an old man and a snake comes out of nowhere then I end up here.
What is this hell? What did he mean by being in his arms
again?
That dosen't even make any si.....
Koyoka......koyoka....Come to me.....
A soothing whisper called to Koyoka.
Koyoka:Who's there!
Come to me....Come to meeeeeee!
Koyoka:I'm coming master.
Koyoka walked off and found her self inside a garden of
Chrysanthamas, her favorite.
A shadow snuck up on her and grabbed her waist from the back.
Chapter 1: My life is over
One day a girl named Koyoka was serving the costermers at her job,
when her boss came up to her and told her it was her turn to close down the shop.
10:00...Awww...Man i'm like so tired. Koyoka said to her self as she locked up the shop.
Then a strange man came up to her.
The End is near.
Get away from me!Koyoka said as she screamed.
Then a giant Anaconda burst from under the ground.
Koyoka flew across the street into a wall
because of the impact.
Ugh...What happened. Koyoka said as she woke up.
Your in my realm. said a deep voice.
Who are you?
I am the ruler of darkness.
The voice got closer and closer. Koyoka got up and ran out of the room..........
Chapter 2:Lost inside
As she ran the hall turned into a forest.
Roots came from the ground as she tried to run.
She tripped and scraped her arm and leg.
Blood dripped from her body.
Where ever you run I'm there...HAHAHAHA!
Thorns came from the ground.
Koyoka screamed in agony.
Then a boy came from out of nowhere and swooped
Koyoka up into his arms.
He flew gracefuly into the sky.
They came to a stop at a waterfall.
Hey girl wake up....
Koyoka:Huh..wha..where am I, and who are you?
The boy:My name is Serie, and you?
Koyoka.
Serie:No offense but after that you should be dead.
I mean those thorns went through your intire body.
Koyoka:If thats true then why am I not bleeding.
Serie:I don't know. But you probably need some rest so
I suggest you get some rest.
HAHAHA! It dosen't matter who your with I'm still there
I'll never leave until I have you in my arms again.
Koyoka:What do you want from me!
Why can't you just leave me be.
A shadow approached her,it grabbed her waist.
Then a body appeared.It started to kiss koyoka...
But then she pushed him away.
He pulled his sword out.
If you dont want live and be with me.Then die here and now!!!!
Koyoka:Noooooo....Huh..wha... Oh it must've been a dream.
Koyoka got up from her resting place and walked over to Serie and kissed him good-bye.
As Koyoka walked into the forest it started to change.
The ground she stood on started to rise.
Kiyoka: WHOA!
Then all of a sudden she was sorrounded by rocks and ruins.
Koyoka wandered off into the dark.
She got tired and sat down by a rock.
Koyoka: I must be dreaming, I mean this can't be true.
One minuet I'm locking up the shop, the next minuet an old man and a snake comes out of nowhere then I end up here.
What is this hell? What did he mean by being in his arms
again?
That dosen't even make any si.....
Koyoka......koyoka....Come to me.....
A soothing whisper called to Koyoka.
Koyoka:Who's there!
Come to me....Come to meeeeeee!
Koyoka:I'm coming master.
Koyoka walked off and found her self inside a garden of
Chrysanthamas, her favorite.
A shadow snuck up on her and grabbed her waist from the back.
